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 托福写作常见病句分析(四)


2007-07-26  

 

  31. I am not good at maths, but English

  改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

  32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children’s leisure time?

  改进: Who is the proper person to plan children’s leisure time?

  33.It is children who clear about their interests.

  改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

  34. I agree the latter idea.

  改进: I agree with the latter idea.

  35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

  改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

  36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

  改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

  37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

  改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

  38. No one knows all the things.

  改进: No one knows everything.

  39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

  改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

  40. Each form ofshavingsfriends has its advantages.

  改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.


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