托福独立写作的语言表达技巧

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　　3. the complexity of sentence structures

　　什么样的句式在ETS眼中才能达到complexity的标准呢?OG中要求我们做到a variety of sentence structures(句子结构多样)，那么我们在保证句子表达正确性的基础上适当去变换句型就可以了。在这里很多同学又有误解，认为句子结构多样指的就是写长难句，殊不知滥用从句往往会使得语言变得啰嗦。比如说，我们想表达Mary是一个漂亮的女孩子，写成：Mary is a beautiful girl就可以了，如果偏要写成：Mary is a girl who is beautiful. 看上去句子变长了，还用上了定语从句，实际上整个句子显得累赘。我们通过对于独立写作高分范文的文本进行分析，可以总结出在高分范文中常见的句式有：

　　(1)并列句(包括平行结构，neither...nor...，not only...but also...等句式)

　　Junk food may cause a person to develop diabetes, to have heart disease, and to gain weight.

　　The mass media neither gives us the necessary information, nor does it tell us the truth.

　　We need formal education not only to gain knowledge but also learn social skills.

　　(2)从句(包括名词性从句、形容词性从句、副词性从句)

　　What kind of person you wish to become is more important than what kind of job you will have.

　　No one can deny the basic fact that it is impossible for average workers to master those high-technology skills easily.

　　A person who has an optimistic attitude toward his life can endure any hardship.

　　Children tend to imitate what they have seen and heard on mass media, which is sometimes dangerous and harmful.

　　When we watch commercials, we can get a lot of information about various products.

　　Millions of people have to spend more time and energy on studying new skills and technology so that they can keep a favorable position in job market.

　　(3)插入语

　　After-hours study, if properly managed, holds the key to success in the 21st century.

　　College students, lacking social experience, are easily cheated.

　　(4)句子强调(包括强调句式、倒装句式、否定句式等)

　　Although friends definitely play a significant role in shaping teenagers' personality, it is the parents and siblings that have a far greater impact on the development of their personality traits.

　　Only when the heavy and frequent exposure to television is restricted or regulated will the adolescents' life, both bodily and spiritually, be guaranteed.

　　On no account (Under no circumstances) can we ignore the immense value of knowledge.

　　(5)修饰性问句

　　If there were no Internet, how could people get various information immediately?

　　Isn’t that better than worrying about who wins and who loses all the time?

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